Friday, October 25, 2013

Saturday Spankings: Hanna's first spanking from "Daddy"

Welcome to Saturday Spankings! Since it's Spank or Treat weekend, today we are allowed to post more than eight sentences. So of course I'm taking advantage of this, and I've decided to include a scene from Hanna's first spanking from Mr. Foster "Daddy", from Hanna's Awakening, my Amish-age play-spanking-romance soon to be released by Stormy Night Publications.

***Update: Hanna's Awakening just went live on Amazon!***

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“Tell me why you’re getting this spanking, young lady.”

She gasped lightly at his order. “Be – because I disobeyed you. I argued with you in public and I deliberately called you by your name.”

“That’s right, Hanna. I only want what’s best for you. You’re living under my roof and you’re under my authority. It’s my job to protect you and guide you. I’m going to spank you now. I hope you learn something from it, and I hope the sting of my hand on your bottom serves to remind you to mind me in the future.”

Tears flooded her vision. She blinked rapidly as she nodded her understanding. Her heart swelled. She’d never felt so . . . cared for. She hesitated to use the word love, to think of love, because she’d never used that word before. It was an English word with no Amish equivalent, and it had never truly startled her until this moment, this moment when Mr. Foster was preparing to punish her. And most of all, she understood this was a far cry from her daat’s typical punishment. Mr. Foster wanted to teach her a lesson, not take his anger out on her.

He released her shoulder, took a seat on the chair, and patted his leg. “Over my knee.”

A single tear burned down her cheek as she moved to stand at his side. Their eyes locked before he guided her down over his lap.

The height of the chair, combined with Mr. Foster’s tall stature, prevented her toes from touching the floor. She tensed as one hand rested on her lower back, and his other hand cupped her bottom. His touch sent a shiver up her spine. She held her breath until her chest burned.

“I’m afraid I can’t allow you the protection of your skirt. Naughty girls get spanked on their bare bottoms.”

“Mr. Foster! You can’t!” She squirmed in protest as he flipped her skirt back, tucking it around her waist. When she’d imagined him spanking her, it had been with the protection of her dress.

“Not Mr. Foster. Daddy. We’ll be going out in public again, and I don’t want another slip up, so you will call me Daddy from now on, even at home.” A single swat stung her thigh. “Settle down, Hanna. You asked for this. Trust Daddy to give you what you need.”

She froze, and he yanked her panties down to rest at her knees. He could see her. Her backside was bared to him in a most humiliating position. Could he see anything between her legs? At the thought, she tensed up and pressed her thighs together.

“Young lady, you will relax that bottom right now. Good girl. Now spread your legs a bit. That’s it. I want you to feel every slap I give you.”

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Aching for more? Hanna's Awakening is available on Amazon and will hit other e-retailers soon! ;)

Thanks for stopping by, and please visit the authors below for more Saturday Spanking excerpts and complete short stories from this weekend's Spank or Treat festivities.


  1. Wow, what a mix. Tenderness, love, firmness, obedience, fear, embarrassment. All in a short extract. And along with all that, its really hot. Nice one Sue, I have a feeling this is going to be my first Age Play romance.I'm hooked.

  2. There's a lot going on in this scene, but the one thing that caught and held my interest is this: Do you the Amish really not use the word love?

    1. No, they don't use the word love. Instead, they'll say they care for someone or that they're fond of someone.

  3. I didn't know that about the Amish. Love has so many meanings that perhaps they don't use it to avoid confusion. I think you need to care for someone you love, so perhaps care is a better word, though the lack of love in their vocabulary does seem to exclude passion. Great snippet, Sue. Another book for my TBR pile.

  4. What a good snippet, it's caring, and loving - but there is still such anxiety building up in her. This is a very interesting promise.

  5. Great teasing snippet. Can't wait for more.

  6. LOVED this, Sue! It's going in my shopping trolley. This is definitely my kind of book. Well done!

  7. This is a very exciting little excerpt! I love the cover too. I don't have a lot of experience in age play, reading or otherwise, but this most certainly intrigued my 'want' to know more.
    I never knew that Amish people refrained from using the word love. I found that an interesting little fact and now I'm curious why.
    I love the straight forward but also caring way he explains why she's going to be spanked. Her innocent and emotional reaction was quite endearing.
    Great Excerpt, Sue!

  8. Congrats on the new release, Sue! I love the "Daddy" thang. Sounds like a great read. :)

  9. I liked all the emotion poured into this one, made me squeeze my thighs together for the poor girl. ;)

  10. I'm dying to know how this arrangement came about. I like the scene but am intrigued more by what the back story could be. Hope we'll see more of this. I'm glad to see there are no taboo words in your title and the cover is not at all questionable. Just be careful with your blurb, don't want to risk being subject to the reactionaries over at Amazon. Good luck Sue!

  11. Great excerpt, Sue!
    Congrats on the new release!
    I did not know about the word "love" for the amish.
    Very well done.

  12. Congratulations on the new release. A great snippet blending the Amish with spanking and age play. I like that she can tell the difference in her abuse of the past with this more caring form of restitution.

  13. I had no idea you had a new release out! This looks like an interesting one! I've worked in the Amish community, so this will be fun. I truly enjoyed the snippet!

  14. lovely :) I can't wait to read this. I love the bit of role play, the sexiness of the scene, the spanking, and the knowledge of Amish customs