Friday, November 22, 2013

Saturday Spankings: Betsy's first time over her master's knee...


Hello and welcome to Saturday Spankings! Today I'm sharing another snippet from the sequel to Surrender. My first draft is almost finished...yay! Ohhh and I think I've decided on a title. Commander's Slave. Unless I change my mind, which very well may happen. But for now, here's an excerpt:


He paused but kept his hand on her bottom, a threat that he could resume spanking at any second. “I will be a fair master to you, Betsy. I won’t cause you any permanent harm. The worst you can expect from me is a good strapping if you’ve committed a serious offense. Your behavior reflects on me and I expect you to conduct yourself accordingly, especially while in the presence of others in the household and in the village. Disobedient slaves in other households are punished much more severely than you will be here. You should consider yourself lucky, little human.”

Lucky. Right. She sniffled and willed the tears to stop, but her bottom ached and she hated the emotion swelling in her chest.



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16 comments:

  1. I'm intrigued! I like the title. I also liked Betsy's thoughts at the end.

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  2. I will be looking forward to the release of tis one.

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  3. Lovely snippet. I'm looking forward to it Sue!!

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  4. Oh, something tells me she is a very lucky little human. Lovely snip

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  5. Geez, Sue. I'm not even into M/F and you had me squirming the whole way through. It's your fault if I can't focus on my writing today. :)

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  6. Really neat little snippet--so intriguing!

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  7. Poor Betsy! I hope he's good to his little slave. :)

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  8. Don't you just love Top logic? Great snippet and well done with your manuscript progress!

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  9. Wow! So many things about that snippet caught my attention not the least of which were slave and human. I definitely want to read more, so I hope you continue posting from this story. I like Commander's Slave as a title. So many questions. Congrats on completing your book's first draft. Now, I'm going to check out Surrender.

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  10. This looks so great Sue. I can’t wait ti read it :)

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  11. Oh my. What sort of kinky story are you writing now?

    Saw an Amish buggy the other day and thought of you. LOL

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  12. I went to buy Surrender so I'd be ready when this one came out. Guess what, I'd already bought and it was trapped in my TBR. I moved it to the top of the list. So your snippet worked to tease me, little human. LOL

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  13. Lucky, lucky girl though I'm guessing she might not feel that way!

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  14. oo I love this and I can't wait to read it. I love reading Betsy's thoughts. very interesting and arousing. I love his hand waiting on her bottom

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  15. What Paloma said! I would jump at the chance to trade places with Betsy. Really hot snippet - looking forward to reading more.

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